Tuesday 17 June 2008

Task 1: CONTENT AND FORMAT, and the winners are...

These are the writings that have been chosen by AACI students to be the winners for TASK 1:

TEENS 1

  • 101T "The Addams Family"
by Leandro Bermejo:
This is the Addams Family. They live at 0001 Cemetery Lane, Westfield, New Jersey.Their phone number is 4994-4444. Their names are: Gomez, Morticia, Pugsley, Wednesday, Uncle Fester and Grandma Addams. The mother's name is Morticia. My favourite character is Uncle Fester. He is sixty years old, he likes meat and he eats a lot.
by Victoria Gil:
This is the Addams Family. They live at 0001 Cemetery Lane, Westfield, New Jersey. Their phone number is 4234-5678. Their names are Gomez, Morticia, Pugsley, Wednesday, Uncle Fester adn Grandma Adams. My favourite character is Wedenesday. She is 10 years old. She likes dolls. She reads books.
by Ayelén Maggio:
This is the Addams Family. They live at 0001 Cemetery Lane Westfield, New Jersey. Their phone number is 4234-5678. Their names are Gomez, Morticia, Pugsley, Wedenesday and Fester. My favourite charcter is Wednesday. She is 10 years old. Shel likes dolls. She reads books.
  • 102T "The Addams Family"
by Nehuén Fernández
The Addams Family are crazy. They live in a scary mansion, opposite a cemetery. They like death, but they don't like happy and beautiful things.
Large is very tall, and he has got short hair. He is like Frankenstein. He has a black suit. He has got red eyes.
  • 103T "The Addams Family"
by Claudia Martinez
The Addams Family are crazy. They live in a scary mansion, opposite the cemetery. They like death. The Addams family don't like happy things. Pugsley doesn't like football. Wednesday plays with knives and axes. Morticia likes tango. Uncle Fester likes pain. Grandma Addams's 80 years old and she cooks in the house. She likes witchcraft. She isn't clean.
TEENS 2

  • 201t " A day in the life of Marcelo Tinelli"
by Juan Ignacio Espósito
His name is Marcelo Hugo Tinelli. He's a very famous TV presenter. He was born on April 1st 1960 in Bolivar, Bs As, Argentina. He's married to Paula Robles. He has got four children, Francisco, Juana, Candelaria and Micaela. He's a businessman, a TV and films producer, a TV presenter and a sports manager. He attends award ceremonies twice a month. He often does business. He takes his children to school every morning. He meets important people. He has got interviews.
His hobbies are running marathons and playing football. He goes skiin with his family. He appears in magazines. He spends time with his family. He presents a TV show every night.
  • 202T " A Day in the life of Marcelo Tinelli"
by Natanael Saravia
In the morning, Tinelli gets up very early. He has breakfast with his family, he drinks some coffee and eats a chocolate cake and some biscuits. After his breakfast Tinelli sometimes goes running in the park. He always goes to work after that.
He works until 1pm. Later, Tinelli has lunch at 2pm. He likes to order beefburger and salad. He has a healthy diet and he does some excercise every day. Yinelli plays tennis with his friends once a week. He hardly ever goes shopping. In his job, he has meetings and he signs contracts for Ideas Del Sur.
Tinelli works on TV in the evening. He often helps his children with their homework. He has dinner with this friends from work. They go to a restaurant and eat pizza or a lot of meat. He goes to bed very late. He sleeps 7 hours.
  • 203T "A day in the life of Marcelo Tinelli"
by Rocío B. Guastavino
He gets up at 5.45 every morning. He has a shower at 6.00 every day. Then he has breakfast with his family. He gets dressed and later he brings his children to school.
He usually gives interviews to the paparazzies and then he appears in magazines. At 12.00 he spens time with his family for lunch. At 2.00pm he does a lot of business. At 6.00pm he goes to the studio to test the programme. At 8.00pm he dresses up for the programme and then he makes up. At 10.30 he hosts the TV programme. At midnight he goes home. And then he has dinner. At 00.45 he goes to bed.
  • 205T "A day in the life of Marcelo Tinelli"
by Ana Belén Trad
When Tinelli wakes up, he takes a shower and brushes his teeth. Usually, he listens to the radio while he has breakfast. After that, he takes his children to school. In the afternoon he runs and he goes to the sports club. Then, he has lunch while he watches TV.
In the evening, he goes to the studio and makes up. He hosts a TV show while he speaks with the celebrities. Sometimes, he goes to a restaurant with his family. Then he goes home, and goes to sleep.
TEENS 3
  • 301t " The mystery of Anna's death"
by María del Rosario Pérez Bargo
... One day a woman went to the beach, two hours later the woman died, her name was Anna. Tom, her husband killed Anna because he wanted her money. Tom was a thief and a bad person. Then Tom married his girlfriend, Allison. Later the police investigated Anna's death and they knew who killed Anna. Tom escaped to another country. One year later the police found Tom with his new wife in Chile and the police took them to prison.
  • 303T
by Demian Larrieu Let
In front of them now was a small alien. And it had a human head in its hands. It tried to talk, but it couldn't. And, suddently, it died.
The four men didn't understand whathe or maybe she had tried to say. They took the body of the alien and the head to the main quarters. While they were looking inside the alien's body, they found a chip with a strange password. They discovered the secret password and this is what the chip said: "Look out you fools...!"
  • 304T "The dangerous night"
by Agustina López Bono & Agustina La Rosa
One night a young woman went for a swim in the sea. She didn't come back. The next morning the police found ther dead on the beach.
Her name was Lucy.
It happened two years ago, in the ocean.
It was a strmy nigh. Lucy was walking along the beach, she was lookin for ther dog because it had disappeared.
When she was walking on the beach, she heard a noise in the water and she got closer. She thought that the noise in the ocean was her dog.
Lucy went into the ocean to find it but the only thing that she found was a mermaid. The mermaid was sleeping, she was very beautiful but she was furious.
Lucy started to swim far away from the mermaid. Lucy was afraid, but a terrible thing happened...
After two minutes she died, because her foot was trapped with a rope. Her dog appeared just when she died, the dog was very sad.
Then the police arrived and they found the body of the girl.
  • 305 "The true killer"
by Camila B. Escalada Fernández

One night in New York in 1998, a young woman, Gabriella, went for a swim in the sea. She didn’t come back. The next morning the police found her dead on the beach.
John, her ex husband and a private detective, was there that morning. Matt Curline, the most mistrustful police officer, was there too. When John saw him, he started to run fast and then he disappeared.
Matt believed John was the killer, and he told that to his best friend, Dave, another police officer.
The next morning Matt was killed. Dave started to investigate the case and he discovered that the “police officers” weren’t real police officers; the killer was a police officer or a detective; and he suspected John was the killer.
John knew Matt couldn’t tell the truth because he was dead. But, what truth? Nobody knew.
On Saturday morning, Dave saw John. When John saw him, he took his gun but Dave ran like the fastest in the world and John couldn’t kill him. Now Dave knew John was the killer. But was that true? Yes, that was the truth, but who could suspect John, a private detective, was the killer? Only Dave.
On Sunday night, John called Dave and he said: “If you tell the truth, I will kill your family and then you!” Next morning, Dave ran away with his family and nobody knew where.
One week later, Dave told the truth on TV.
Now John and the false police officers are dead. Nobody knows who killed them, but today all the people know who is Dave Pierre.

  • 306 T
by Verónica Pagani
They got married, but he went mad and after their first son, he disappeared.
Seventeen years later...
- " I don't remember this place, I thought. It isn't home. Not my home. My home is far away, in New Zealand. With mum. This is a different home... that was my dad's home and I didn't like it." Leandro told us
-"After 3 days without food and water, he appeared... so dark, so sad... then he caught me, at that moment I didn't recognize him, then he took me to a room and he kidnapped me but after all that he just left me."
- "That was an incredible story..." News on a survivor - reporting.
TEENS 4
  • 401T "Mariano Martínez"
by Emilia Otero
Mariano Martínez was born on 5 December in 1978, in La Boca, Buenos Aires, Argentina. He is an Argentinean Actor.
When he was born his parents broke up and his brothers and he went to live with his mother to Avellaneda. He went first to the school called E.N.S.P.A. but then he went to the school "San Martín".
He is a lovely mand who had a lot of famous girlfriends.
Martinez's first TV appeareance came at the age of 16, when he received a small role in TVseries "La leyenda de un hombre malo". When he reached 18, he already had a number of television credits to his name, including popular operas "RR D.T.", "La nena", "Por siempre mujercitas" among others.
In 1999, he starred "Campeones" and after his role here, as Valentín D'Alessandro, Mariano has been on other programmes. In 2006 he was the main character of the programme "Alma Pirata" and most recently landedad the role of Juan in "Son de fierro".
  • 402T "Biography of Mother Teresa"
by Candela Szischik
Mother Teresa was born on August 26th 1910, and she was the youngest child of an Albanian grocer. She was born in Skopje, Yugoslavia.
When she was 18 years old, she studied English in Dublin with the Irish sisters of Loreto, and she received the first comunion at the age of 5, and was confirmed in November 1916.
She was tiny, frail but outspoken. She was also always on her own, independent and obedient.
She believed that God wanted her to work among the sick and needy. She wanted to found an order of nuns, sho she established the order of the Missionaries of Charity, and later a home for abandoned children, and also a colony for lepers. Also she won the Nobel Peace Prize, in 1979 for her humanitarian work.
In 1970, she had become internationally known for her humanitarian work. She is also remembered by millions of peopela as a saint for her work, faith and commitment to poor people.
She died on September 5th 1997 in Calcutta, India, at the age of 87.
  • 403T "Mother Teresa"
by Bianca Mazzola
She was born on August 26th in 1910, she was the youngest child of an Albanian grocer, and she was born in Shopje, Yugoslavia. When she was 18 years old, she studied English in Dublin with Irish Sisters of Loreto. She was a tiny, frail but outspoken woman. She believed God wanted her to work among the sick and needy.
She wanted to found an order of nuns, and she established the Order of the Missionaries of Charity in 1950. She opened a home for the poor in Calcutta, later a home for abandoned children, also a colony for lepers.
She was remembered by millions of people as a saint for hard work, faith and commitment to poor people.
  • 404T "Norberto Napolitano (1950-2005)"
By Alejandro Perucha
Norberto Napolitano was born on March 10, 1950 in La Paternal. He died on February 24, 2005. His nickname was Pappo. He started to play the guitar at the age of 10.
Pappo became an underground working-class hero when he started to play with his band "Pappo's Blues". But he became very popular when he started to play with "Riff".
Pappo started his career in the band "Los Gatos", the first rock band to enter the mainstream charts in Argentina. He also played in the first incarnation of "Los Abuelos de la Nada" and "La Pesada del Rock and Roll". In the mid 1970s Pappo spent some time in Brazil and also in England playing alongside with B.B. King in the Madison Square Garden in 1993and 1994.
On Febrary 24, 2005 Pappo went to dine out with his son Luciano and his son's girlfriend. At km 71 on Motorway 5, Pappo's Harley Davidson chopper touched Luciano's motorcycle. Pappo fell and a car travelling in the opposite direction hit him causing his death.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Congratulations! Well Done!
:)

Anonymous said...

Congratulations everyone!! Your descriptions of the Addams family are wonderful. Keep up your good work!!!
Susana.

Anonymous said...

For Teens 2 students: Very well done indeed! Your descriptions of Marcelo Tinelli's routines are very well organised and very easy to read. Congrats!!!!

Anonymous said...

To all the students who wrote about Marcelo Tinelli: Well Done!!! Your descriptions about his routines are very clear and very easy to read. Congrats!!!

Mar said...

Excellent work, all of you!!! :-)
Keep it up!

Mar said...

Dear Alejandro,
I never had so much information about Pappo. He was one of the best musicians ever and I greatly admired him. It shows you're a fan too!
Great work!

Anonymous said...

Hi Ale,
You did a great job. It is a very interesting biography. Congratulations!